Chapter 1: Page 22
This week, tempers run hot on the Canid/Ermehn issue – Kenosh of course has his moral opposition, but long-standing alliances of convenience always seem to stand in the way of making the best choice. Riling up the Canid and their army (as mentioned in the prologue, the most powerful army in all the Four Kingdoms) is certainly not in the best interests of a peaceful kingdom like Sunsgrove, and Dabheid must weigh the interests of his kingdom against Kenosh’s demand for fairness.
Whatever Kenosh suggests in next week’s page, you can bet that it will factor into Dabheid’s course in this conflict – the ramifications of which could be felt for generations to come, and lead the kingdom to prosperity or ruin. Being a king is hard business!
To lighten the mood a bit, Rachel put together an amazing series of images this week to celebrate something we all can appreciate: The Olympics! While the world of Beyond the Western Deep does not have an actual Olympics competition, after seeing these images I was tempted to come up with something akin to a nationwide series of sporting events encompassing all seven races of the land.
At the moment, the politics at play would prevent such a competition from occurring, but someday in the future, who knows?
It was also a fun exercise to finalize the other races’ flag designs, and come up with clever Olympic-themed outfits for the various races based on their flag colors. I should also mention that all of these pictures were a complete surprise to me, and I can’t emphasize enough how awesome I think all this stuff is!
Essentially, Rachel brainstormed which characters/races would excel in certain events. First up, Quinlan himself, showing a rather impressive performance in gymnastics!
The Tamian, with their natural agility and tree-jumping means of locomotion, are perfectly suited to the gymnastics events. Quinlan here is taking to the horizontal bar with aplomb.
Dakkan, of course, leads the swimming events along with the other Lutren. Really it’s just not fair for the other races that the Lutren can even participate – though the Polcan, with their waterborne lifestyle and eternal conflict with the Lutren race, have no doubt put up strong competition against them!
While the Lutren have the advantage in the water, there’s no doubt that the Canid have a clear advantage when it comes to punching things in the face.
To that end, they likely will have dominated the boxing ring for endless competitions, barely giving their opponents a chance to hear the opening bell before knocking that very memory from their skulls!
The Canid may have strength on their side, but technique and flexibility are not their best areas of expertise. To that end, their Ermehn neighbors to the north would have quite an advantage over them in events like Judo, where the Canid muscle can be turned against them with an expertly-timed takedown.
While the Polcan rivalry with the Lutren in the swimming events wouldn’t yield the former a lot in the way of medals, there is one series of water-based events we could definitely see them excelling at:
Because the Polcan spend literally every moment of their lives at sea aboard a fleet of ships, they would have a supreme advantage against the Lutren in matters of rowing and oarsmanship. The Lutren are no slouches though, and it would no doubt be a hard-fought event. And the Felis – living on the eastern coasts of the Four Kingdoms – would likely put up solid (but only bronze-worthy) competition.
The Vulpin, not to be outdone, would have a firm handle on the long-jump and endurance events, such as the marathon, decathlon, etc.
All that walking through the Desert of Zin surrounding their capital city of Nessa keeps them in prime condition, and in their kingdom of Navran, nothing is close in proximity – making long-distance running more of a necessity than a leisure activity.
There is, however, one endurance sport that the Vulpin would not excel in, and that is where the Felis come in – with soccer.
The sport would provide the Felis with an adequate outlet to prove their brilliance to throngs of adoring fans in the form of on-field strategy, and there’s something about the sport that just seems to fit the high-minded and scholarly Felis. They also excel at soccer because, well, let’s be honest here – it’s a bunch of cats chasing after a ball :)
I can’t get over how awesome it was to be surprised by these fantastic images – be sure to swing by Rachel’s Tumblr account to get her commentary on each piece, and to leave comments on how awesome they are if you have Tumblr account yourself. Or feel free to leave comments here! We won’t hold it against you!
No matter who you’re cheering for, have a happy Olympics!
Three things I love about this page: Kenosh’s expression in the second panel, that look that Quinlan and Dakkan exchange in the fourth, and Dabheid’s weary expression in the last one. The expressions are getting a lot better now XD
I just want to say… I LOVE Kenosh, so much honour in that character. I was not certain I would like him, but he’s just as cool as Dakkan.
But my favourite thing this week was definitely the olympian gallery. WOW that’s amazing!
And Kenosh has won me over. xD Great job guys, I’m looking forward to next week’s comic as usual. The Olympian gallery is just awesome. Way to go Rachel.
Ahhhh, Olympics! I love this collection. Nice job, Rachel!
Also, I’d be curious to see the kind of competition put up in the more neutral sports, such as, say, ping pong – where just about anyone could excel.
I would posit that ping pong would be hard-fought between the Tamian, Polcan, Felis, and Ermehn. When the ball goes flying, I think those four races would be most adept at leaping after it. Same goes for tennis and badminton :)
Ahh Kenosh, so noble.
Love it, and sorry for not commenting for a LOOONG while, but I do have a life (I know I amaze myself with that one). Anyway, I knew it would just be another AWESOME page to add to this AWESOME comic ;) Good work! Keep it up!
Just started reading this comic, and I’m already a fan. :) I did want to mention a slight grammatical error on this page… “The Canid are a sworn ally” …. you use the plural “are” for a singular “ally”. It should read, “The Canid are sworn allies.” Otherwise, you could say “The Aisling nation is a sworn ally” etc. etc. :)
Nice eyeroll there in the background.
“Being a king is hard business…”
Indeed it is. Poor Dabheid… It’s his expression in the final panel, where he rests his tired brow against his paw, that clenches it. Dabheid, like Caldus, is another prime example of a character that could’ve been rather flat and sterotypical, that you two manage to make a lot more interesting and sympathetic. Authority figures in fiction, especially those of older age, are often presented as rather unlikeable and flat. Dabheid, who is a king in addition to being rather old and fat, could so easily have been portrayed as just a jolly, absent-minded and ignorant doofus. Showing him struggling with all the hardships of rulership, torn between doing the right thing and what will benefit his own people the most, is an excellent example of how you’ve avoided that trap. Very good work *hugs*
Still, while this is all interesting, the real star of this page is the Olympics! I was really surprised when you added this to the commentary (I knew the Olympics were going on at the time, but I’m not a fan of sports so it wasn’t really on my mind), but it turned out to be the thing I was most impressed by. Apparently Kobb did all this by herself, so kudos to you for spontaneously whipping up something so awesome!
So, taking a look at this presumably-centuries-in-the-future-when-politics-media-and-technology-have-evolved montage, we see what sport each species would excel in. Quinlan and Dakkan (or perhaps a future descendant, more like) each have a spot in the gymnastics and swimming competition, unsurprisingly. I should mention that the pic of Dakkan might be my favourite – he just looks so sexy! That muscular chest and build, those tight-fitting swim trunks, his roguish smile and winning look while drying off his back with a towel… You could make anyone in the audience swoon, Dak! :)
The Tamian and Lutren area of expertise was rather obvious, but the five remaining ones were more interesting. The Canid and Ermehn would be best at different types of martial arts, the Polcan would beat their (hopefully no longer) enemies at boating, the Vulpin would excel at at endurance events and long-jumps and the Felis have a natural affinity for ball sports. All of them make sense, and the imagery of Felis playing with balls is just ADORABLE! Meow, meow!
One issue there might be with these sorts of Olympics is that the outcome might be rather predictable in a mixed-species competition if it’s one where a certain race excels. If there is a swimming competition, would the swimmers even bother to take part if they knew they’d compete against a Lutren? Maybe it would devolve into an event where members of only one race usually competes (swimming is all-Lutren, gymnastics is all-Tamian and so forth).
Also, I think football is one place where the competitors should wear shoes – otherwise they’d end up with a lot of stubbed toes :(
This is a good a place as any to ask, as the Polcan appear to be a racial version of “Sir Not-Appearing-in-this-Book”, so.
It’s easy to identify what the other races are based off of:
Tamian = Squirrel
Lutren = Otter
Canid = Wolf
Vulpin = Fox (so far, they appear to strictly be Fennec foxes)
Felis = Cat (that being, common domestic cat)
Ermehn = Ermine/Stoat
The only one that confused me at first is the Polcan, but they seem to most closely fit black-footed ferrets. Is this correct?
Polcan are actually based on marbled polecats. They used to be a more generic sort of ferret in the earliest drafts, but marbled polecats have cool markings… and with a race of pirates, you can make a decent number of them go shirtless to show off those cool markings, heheh.
The Felis are kind of an amalgamation of several species of small felines, but the main influence was the Andean mountain cat – it’s where they get their long, fluffy tails. I just toned down the markings to be more subtle.
Vulpin are based on kit/swift foxes.
Okay. Thanks for clarifying.
….was Kenosh was about to mention the Oran Uprising?