Chapter 2 Intermission: Week 1
Hi everyone! As I mentioned last week, we spent a majority of this week focusing on edits and updates to previous pages throughout Chapter 1 to prepare for the upcoming book. These changes are mostly just simple word tweaks or minor art details we wanted to fix but couldn’t before, and now that the story is venturing out of the digital realm and into the world of print, we figured a spit-polish beyond the hectic week-by-week schedule would be a good idea.
So instead this week I thought I might offer up a fun little intermission post to carry us through to next week and initiate some discussion! In the story right now, Quinlan, Kenosh, and Dakkan have just arrived at Deltrada Garrison in the Canid kingdom of Aisling. As emissaries from a neighboring kingdom, they’re to be on their best behavior and represent the kingdom of Sungrove in the best possible light. This introduces us to the concept of Sunsgrovian etiquette.
You may recall early on in Chapter 2, Dakkan mentions that if they had been traveling to see the Canid king in the capital of Arklow, they would have worn fancier clothing. He wasn’t joking — while Kenosh’s manner of dress wouldn’t necessarily change due to his well-known position as a high-ranking military officer, Dakkan and Quinlan would have likely donned more “high class” clothing if they were going to the Canid capital instead of a freezing military garrison near the border. It’s important to make the right impression, after all!
Above we see the Lutren equivalent of a tuxedo. It could be argued that Dakkan is wearing it a little more casually than normal — the forearm wrappings would either be equally aligned to avoid looking haphazard or they would be made of a solid material like wood or gold. Dakkan’s misaligned arm wraps are a bit like a bowtie being askew in a tuxedo — you’re still wearing the right things, just maybe not quite the right way. The high collar is a Lutren fashion element borrowed from their seafaring history (high collars helped to stave off cold coastal winds) — you’ll notice Kenosh’s military garb sports something similar.
Even when the coasts are far away, the high collar design is markedly Lutren. Each race has its own variation on the formal tail-ring, as well. The Lutren have a heavy, solid piece, usually fashioned from the same material as the arm wrappings (gold or wood again). Proper fashion etiquette generally favors having the arm wrappings and tail ring matching in material, though this isn’t a hard and fast rule.
Another element to etiquette comes from customs and behaviors between the kingdoms and authority figures. In our world, for example, a deeper bow is a sign of deeper respect and reverence to the one you are bowing to. In Terria, the Tamian have various degrees of bows they perform in different situations, from a simple head bow to an extremely elaborate gesture used to show that the one giving it has the utmost trust and respect for the one receiving the gesture.
Formally called a “proper bow”, this position, achieved by balancing on the right foot, with the left leg raised and crossed at the knee, is meant to show that the Tamian in question trusts the one receiving the bow implicitly. Because the Tamian race is built for quick reflexes and hasty escapes, the landbound races (particularly the Lutren) felt most uncomfortable meeting with the Tamian when they believed their tree-jumping counterparts could launch an attack and dash off at a moment’s notice. The introduction of the proper bow changed that — a Tamian contorting into this awkward position removed all possible advantages of their kind and made them vulnerable in ways they wouldn’t normally be. This show of trust helped set a positive tone for diplomatic exchanges with other races.
This week, we’ve got an awesome bit of guest art to share! For this, we have reader Veigue (aka Klein01) to thank!
I absolutely love this style, and seeing most of the cast here elicited one big grin after another as we pored over all the fun details Veigue added. The weapons in particular are fantastic — both in the “awesome” and “fantastical” senses, with their almost World of Warcraft-level of detail and exaggeration, they’re all extremely fun to look at.
Another fun addition here is the “human in the BWD world” in the lower-right! While there aren’t any humans in the BWD world, I do know Rachel’s been thinking about trying to draw the main cast as humans (similar to what Tracy Butler does with her Lackadaisy cast on occasion). I know I’m personally looking forward to seeing those someday :)
Thanks again for the wonderful art, Veigue! We love it!
I hope I’m not the only person that thought of the Monty Python intermission music when I saw the picture XD
What, you mean this?
I started laughing at the singing Ashtor in the fan art and all the manga additions, especially Clovis. SO DRAMATIC. All the information is rather nice, too!
Aww, they look as cute as buttons in the intermission picture! And I think Dakkan pulls off dapper casual very well.
Looks like we’ll have to wait for the next page of BWD. That’s really sad…
But how can I remain sad for long with such an awesome intermission page. I think this one actually exceeds the “Chess Loading” page we’ve seen earlier in pure awesomeness! For some reason, it kinda reminds of Siskel & Ebert, though which one is which is up for debate – neither one’s fat or bald…
(No disrespect meant to either of them. They were totally awesome and some of the best film critics of all time. May they watch new movies together once again now…)
Dakkan looks so snappy in that dress – even in the Lutren equivalent of a tuxedo he comes across as carefree and devil-may-careish! And that bow… At first I couldn’t help but think it looks unbelievably silly, but then that’s kinda the whole point – to make yourself look more vulnerable and frail to show that the one you’re greeting has nothing to fear from you. And Quinlan looks really cute doing it ;)
Man, all these new background pages make me love the characters more and more…
And that piece of guest art… You are truly fortunate to have such talented fans, AlexRachel! Veigue deserves a big applause for such an amazing gift!
Drawing the BWD characters as humans? Interesting idea…
I hope we’ll get just as good an intermission next week!
Oh man, I love how courteous Quin and Dakkan look. And them watching a movie in a 20th century setting so casually is so hilariously adorable.
I cant wait to see next week’s filler art!
You done good, son.
ah thank you!
I can’t help but imagine an Olympic athlete in Quin’s posture during a ski jump or something >.>
Dakkan looks absolutely insufferable in that getup. I can just picture some young stuck-up arrogant noble who’s important only because of his father wearing that expression XD
Fortunately with Dakken it’s only an *imitation* of said snobbery, done in jest. “Of course, when you’re as handsome as *I* am, you can afford your wrist wrappings to be a bit crooked.
Also, Ashtor and Kenosh look so young in the fanart! No doubt this is what they looked like in their prime.
I can’t help but see an old-fashioned Coke bottle in the white stripe on Dakkan’s fancy clothes.
“Might as well go for a soda
Nobody hurts and nobody cries
Might as well go for a soda
Nobody drowns and nobody dies!”
Fitting isn’t it since Dak doesn’t like blood… ;)
Lookit Dakkan, hummin’ and snappin’ along to a jazzy beat. He’s got quite the swagger to him, that’s for sure. You know, I know you said his arm wrappings are kinda causal for the dress, but for me they look fitting for an otter about Dak’s age. I mean, The arm wrappings to me sort of symbolize a squire on the verge of being a knight – he looks the part, but doesn’t have his spurs yet. I imagine that once you become ennobled or reach a certain rank in the Sea Guard, you earn proper vambraces (precious metal (ie gold/silver) if you’re a noble, plain steel if you’re a Guard). Regardless, it’s cute to see him all dressed up. Adds another dimension to his character.
And then there’s poor Quinlan, who was probably taught at a very young age how to perform that move of ‘etiquette.’ Ha. This pose may seem awkward to the other species, but if you study the limb position, that raised foot could quickly become a kick or the first step in an escape (think Looney Toon before they speed off), and that paw behind the back… that could easily reach for a concealed blade… gah! Assassins! I have no doubt Quin’s grandfather would have shown him a few tricks with that one. ;)
Anyways, it was great to see these little snippets and I can’t wait until next weeks postings!
Cheers and sharp quills,
FT
If that pose is supposed to symbolize utter trust in another, wouldn’t it be in really poor taste trying to learn tricks to attack from it?
It would be in poor taste in most cases, yes — but it would also be tactically remiss for a Tamian to not know the quickest ways out of the bow if they were to accidentally put their trust in the wrong individual :)
xD Dakkan’s facial expressions are always great.
No Dakken, looking snappy does not mean you have to snap your fingers.
He’s just feeling good about looking good! All the more reason to snap one’s fingers!
Looking at the guest art, I noticed a couple of interesting things. First, I noticed Japanese writing above/near the names of the characters. Second, I saw a human. This begs the question. Are humans a part of this story or is it just something the artist added?