Song of the Eastern Sands: Hiatus Story 3
Fall of the Evyn-din
There were three Canid soldiers, one with his bow drawn. Sunlight cast down soft pillars through the conifers, motes of dust shimmering within like minerals. The Canid soldiers in the clearing didn’t notice it. Neither too did the pair of Ermehn warriors frozen in their line of sight.
“Couple a’ fine heads for our walltops, eh?” The Canid patrol leader smirked at his quarry. The Ermehn warriors had been hunting grouse, but Bevan and Kraith had not expected to find themselves being hunted in the same fashion.
“Actually,” Bevan spoke up, trying his hardest to remain calm in the face of near-certain death. He gestured to his hunting partner and closest friend in the Northern Wastes, who stood frozen beside him. “Kraith’s head is actually kinda small? Not sure if you keep score or get bonuses or anything, but it’s definitely not worth full value.”
The Canid patrol leader looked slightly taken aback by Bevan’s calm demeanor, but quickly recovered, drawing his sword in a deliberate, slow arc. “I’m sure a few days in Deltrada will cleanse you of that… ill-advised sense of humor.”
“I thought you just wanted our heads?”
“Only after they’ve talked, first.”
“Talked?”
The other two soldiers began to fan out.
“To tell us where your tribe is hiding. So we can destroy it.”
Bevan’s eyes darted back and forth. There were four avenues of escape from death in that forest clearing — one of which involved surrender, so Bevan discounted that immediately. Three avenues of escape, all with pretty high probabilities of–
“Bevan?” Kraith was shaking a bit. Bevan held out a paw, trying to calm him.
“Hey, c’mon, just relax. I’ve got three–”
A Canid stepped a few steps too many to his right, blocking a path out of the clearing.
“–two ideas. Just need to trust me.”
Kraith’s paw clenched suddenly, whatever fear there had been now replaced by rage. “I’ll not let them take us, Bevan.”
“They won’t.” The young Ermehn lowered his stance, preparing to strike out — but Kraith was already moving.
No!
Kraith pushed past Bevan, drawing his blade and charging the bow-wielding Canid soldier. The arrow found him before he could so much as scream, and Kraith fell to the ground in an instant, life completely ripped from him in a matter of moments.
Time seemed to stop, stretched out in Bevan’s mind to an impossible length. The Canid soldiers had their gaze fixed on the mad Ermehn that had mindlessly charged them — but it wouldn’t stay that way for long. The moment ended. Time moved quickly to catch up.
Bevan pulled a dagger from his belt and threw it at the Canid soldier nearest to him. It was a sloppy throw, but he was close enough where it didn’t matter. The Canid clutched uselessly at the dagger in his chest, stumbling over to the closest soldier for aid that both knew would never come. Bevan ducked, lunging off his front foot and throwing himself headlong into the underbrush alongside the clearing. A Canid archer could reload their bows in a matter of seconds, but the extra benefit of the stumbling soldier in their path bought him another second or two — just long enough for him to slip between the trees and make himself a hard target.
Dammit, Kraith!
Bevan swerved between the trees, hearing the telltale thunk of arrows hitting just a bit too close for comfort. He knew this part of the forest well — enough to know that any direction he ran resulted in the trees thinning out enough for the archers to get a good shot in. And with a Canid archer chasing you, one good shot was all they needed. There was a marsh to the west that would drag him down to his doom, a river to the east filled with deadly pikes, and a birch forest to the south that provided less cover than an open field. No, Bevan needed to go back north — back the way he came. That meant he either needed to somehow slay two heavily armed and armored Canid soldiers who were easily twice his size, or find a way past them.
Guess we’re going up, then!
The Ermehn leapt high, sinking his claws into a nearby conifer and scrambling quickly into the leaves above. It was a short climb, but the foliage was dense enough to mask him from all but the most intent of observers. Unfortunately, Bevan knew, his pursuers were quite intent.
The madness and chaos of the last minutes quickly melted away into an eery silence. Bevan had gotten far enough ahead of the Canid where they wouldn’t be directly behind him anymore. Still, the forest was wide enough and the Canid senses keen enough where his slightest wrong move could alert any of them, and once a Canid howled for aid, that was the end of it — the sound carried across the valleys, capable of alerting any nearby Canid patrol, or, if there was a garrison nearby, an entire regiment of bloodthirsty troops just itching to mount a few more Ermehn heads on their battlements.
Bevan took a moment then to steady his breathing, catch his breath, and give himself a half-moment to grieve for his best friend.
Oh… Oh gods…
He felt tears welling up — but he pushed them back down. He slammed his eyes shut and grit his teeth.
Dammit, dammit, dammit.
Bevan had known him since they were young. Kraith’s tribe, the Havran-din, was a small five family village that had been on the brink of starvation after a particularly bad frost near the northern rim. Bevan’s uncle, Evyn, Champion of the Evyn-din, had saved them from death. The Havran-din allowed itself to be absorbed into the larger tribe, abandoning its name and legacy for the Evyn-din without so much as a drop of blood spilt.
Kraith had been like a brother to Bevan — the two of them near inseparable their whole lives, going on hunting trips and scouting runs together in the most dangerous parts of the Wastes. He was the one who had recommended traveling farther south to hunt grouse, even though that meant the possibility of encountering Canid soldiers encroaching on Ermehn territories. Even though it meant the possibility of death.
Kraith had laughed it off. They’d never gotten caught before.
Wait. Wait!
There. The remaining pair of Canid soldiers were below him. Bevan clenched his paw tight around another dagger. He had two left in his belt.
Close. Very close.
He held his breath.
One of the soldiers’ ears perked up.
“In the tree!”
But Bevan was already descending. The two Canid spun around, the archer raising his bow. Bevan twisted to the side, drawing his dagger back as the arrow flew — it slid past him, missing by a hair. As the arrow slammed into the tree, Bevan’s dagger slammed into the archer Canid’s chest.
The two collapsed to the forest floor, sending a cloud of brown, dried pine needles into the air. Bevan was quick to recover, but couldn’t free his dagger from the fallen soldier. The nimble Ermehn ducked under a sword slash — the remaining soldier was already advancing.
“Well, hold on, let’s maybe talk-?” Bevan tried to play for time — any time — but as his paw reached for his last dagger, the Canid soldier charged him, kicking him squarely in the chest and sending him sprawling backward onto the ground. The air had been knocked from his lungs, and the dagger from his paw.
Uh oh.
He couldn’t move. The Canid soldier approached slowly, with an air of superiority — not too surprising, considering. The sword swung this way and that, perhaps in an attempt to instill fear. “Still want to talk, Ermehn? I’m thinking I’ll cut out your tongue first. How’s that sound to you?”
“Well, let me tell you what I think.” Bevan grabbed a pawful of the dried pine needles and threw them up into the Canid’s eyes. He yelped in surprise and recoiled in pain — it was more than enough time for the Ermehn to roll away from the expected blind slash and grab his dagger in the process. He raised his eyes. The Canid soldier was tilting back his head, getting ready to howl.
“Oh no you don’t-!” Bevan threw his last dagger, piercing the soldier’s neck before so much as a sound could be uttered. The Canid grabbed at the dagger, stunned, before falling backward to the forest floor. The pine needles jumped up in a cloud once more, then settled. The forest was quiet again.
* * *
Bevan was unable to bring Kraith’s body back to the Evyn-din, instead opting for a small improvised burial in the forest. A small mound of stones near the river would mark his friend’s resting place, though the Ermehn knew that he would never be able to visit it again — at least so long as the Canid remained in these lands.
When he returned to the Evyn-din, the tribe was furious. Evyn called for retaliation — a direct attack on none other than Deltrada Garrison itself.
“How exactly do you plan on scaling the walls?” Bevan asked. He was standing in Evyn’s tent, a crude map of the garrison drawn in the dirt at their feet. “You’d need to move in under cover of darkness, maybe have someone drop a rope-”
Evyn waved a paw dismissively. “We’ll have no need for a sneak attack. I’ve summoned for aid from the neighboring tribes. Anyone who can fight, will fight. We’ll attack the garrison just like Oran attacked that one to the west.”
Bevan rolled his eyes. “Oran got lucky and he still died. Deltrada’s the best-defended garrison in the Wastes. You’re not thinking this through, uncle.”
“And you’re letting Kraith’s death turn you soft!” Evyn sneered. “This isn’t Sunsgrove, nephew. The Ermehn fight for what’s theirs. We have to, or the Canid will keep taking… they’ll keep taking our land. They’ll keep taking our sons and daughters. They’ll take everything.”
“So you’re planning to counter that by… throwing your own life away?”
“We’ll have the numbers, and we’ll have the gods on our side.” Evyn looked to the others in the room — other warriors, tacticians, and advisors. Evyn was their leader — their Champion. He could do no wrong.
“Sounds like you won’t be needing me, then,” Bevan muttered, quietly exiting the tent. Nobody tried to stop him, content to continue their planning with the crude map.
The camp was silent; most of the others huddled around a few smaller campfires scattered about. The Evyn-din was large and powerful, but still subject to the same weather as everybody else in the Northern Wastes.
“You know they’ll fail.”
Bevan turned to face the voice. It was an Ermehn he’d never seen before, dressed in a tartan kilt with tattooes belonging to no tribe he was familiar with. He sat before a nearby campfire, back propped against a log.
“What makes you say that?” Bevan asked the stranger.
But he didn’t say anything in response, simply lowering his head the slightest bit, a knowing roll of the eyes.
“Yeah, who am I kidding?” Bevan sighed.
“You’re not planning on joining them, are you?”
“I don’t believe I’ve much choice in the matter, being the Champion’s nephew and all.”
The stranger shook his head. “You are a free Ermehn. You have a choice, same as us all.”
“Us all?” Bevan raised a brow. “To what tribe do you belong?”
“A rather fascinating one, actually,” he said. The stranger stood up and approached Bevan, never breaking eye contact. “My name is Hardin, and I can assure you that my tribe would never throw its best warriors’ lives away on petty revenge.” He looked behind Bevan at Evyn’s tent, then crossed his arms in dismay. “Your Champion would throw your skills away on a pointless suicide mission, and that would be quite a waste. You’re a rather exceptional scout, Bevan. I heard you slew three Canid soldiers in the southern forests today.”
“Three daggers, three Canid.” The scout sighed. “But I lost my friend.”
“I’m sorry for your loss,” Hardin said, sounding like he’d had to say it countless times before. Without missing a beat, he cleared his throat and put a paw on Bevan’s shoulder. “But don’t let your uncle throw your life away. Join my tribe.”
“You’re recruiting?” Bevan grinned. “Look at my tattooes, Hardin. I’m Evyn-din.”
“That will most certainly be a problem,” Hardin said, his voice cold and absolute. “The Evyn-din won’t be around after tomorrow, but the Sratha-din will. The Evyn-din will crash against Deltrada like water against the cliffside, while the Sratha-din will bide its time before taking back what’s ours. The Evyn-din will be repelled, and your entire tribe will be destroyed by Canid vengeance.”
“You seem awfully certain of our inevitable failure.”
“We’ve seen it before,” Hardin said. “Oran tried taking a Canid garrison and failed. Now the Canid march on our lands, seeking out any tribe it deems a threat and destroying it. Your tribe would stir the hive once more, and the repercussions will be even worse than before.”
Bevan shrugged, sitting down on the log before the campfire. “Well, I can’t do too much about it. I’m not the Champion. I don’t make these decisions.”
“Then join my tribe,” Hardin said. “I promise you that if you stay here, Bevan, you will perish tomorrow at the foot of Deltrada. You will be but one of countless other Ermehn corpses to be thrown into Canid grave pits and forgotten.”
“Comforting thought,” Bevan said, rolling his eyes. “I could convince my uncle, perhaps-?”
“There’s no convincing a foolish warrior to avoid a glorious battle,” Hardin said. “Come tomorrow, the Evyn-din will be pariahs of the Northern Wastes, their very markings a symbol of Ermehn folly.” He nodded to Bevan. “Your tattoos will show you as complicit in their plan, an Ermehn who refused to listen to reason and set the race back a hundred years.”
Bevan mulled this over for a moment, then a thought struck him. “Actually-…” He held up a claw to Hardin, signaling him to wait. He stood abruptly, then quickly made his way into his tent on the other side of the camp. There, in a crate along with a handful of well-balanced daggers (which he took) was a cloth cowl — a gift from Kraith to help him hide in the tall shrubs in the southern wilds of the Wastes. He pulled it on and threw up the hood.
“If you see me like this,” Bevan asked, returning to the fire, “to what tribe do you think I belong?”
Hardin looked amused. The Evyn-din tattoos were unique on the face, but everywhere else were the generic “charm” tattoos of the southern tribes, wishing for good health, good hunts, strong children, things of that nature.
“I’d say you look like you’ve got something to hide,” Hardin said. “But it works. If you’re insisting on keeping your face markings.”
“I am.” Bevan dropped the hood. “If I’m to abandon my uncle the day before battle, I’ll carry these to my grave.”
Hardin stood, brushing the ash from the fire off his kilt. “Then you’ve decided?”
“What, to die in a pointless battle or join a tribe with a plan?”
“You’ve made the right choice.” Hardin gestured to the edge of the camp. “We’re half a day’s journey to the southwest.”
Bevan nodded, putting the hood up once again. “Then we’d better get going.”
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I hope you all enjoyed this last hiatus story! Starting next week, we’ll resume Song of the Eastern Sands, picking up right where we left off!
Before I reveal this week’s awesome guest art, I wanted to share a fun little announcement from my friends at League of Geeks:
That’s right! ARMELLO: FURRY ROAD, coming soon to… oh, right, it was announced on April first! So, it’ll be coming out on absolutely NOTHING! :)
For guest art this week, I wanted to share some incredible artwork from Veigue! There’s a concept floating around on Veigue’s blog that I’ve been loving — basically a Western Deep-themed JRPG (albeit with some human characters and magic thrown in for good measure)!
There are a lot of great character-specific posts that I’ll share hopefully in the coming weeks, but one fun thing about these new pieces is his integration of older characters from the now-on-ice “War of the Western Deep” concept Rachel and I had back before we started publishing the main Western Deep story online. Finn (the Lutren) and Mirren (the Tamian) are both holdovers from that.
My favorite element of Veigue’s amazing pieces is always going to be the color. Everything pops and feels so vibrant — which fits the world to a “T”. We love your work, Veigue, and look forward to seeing more in the future!
nice story! it makes me like Bevan even more! (I haven’t mentioned this before, but he’s mah favorite among the Sratha-din) and maybe give him a hug. poor guy.
also, well played, League of Geeks. well played.
I like the guest art! a Western Deep-themed JRPG sounds like a cool idea! I’d play that if it ever becomes a reality :D
Interesting, though I wish Bevan’s past would have been revealed in the comic proper.
One thing to fix: you switch from three to four Canid soldiers at one point.
revenge has always been a cycle
a cycle of madness
what will stop the cycle will change everything
whether the four kingdoms can survive or not
will they learn from their mistakes or repeat them?
that will be unknown
i cant wait to see how this will turn out
Jerome, I love that dynamic pose Bevan is in and the intensity of his pose?
Well, is is just me or have these got progressively darker?
No, no it’s not me. Alas, pore Kraith- we hardly knew ye. As young as Bevan is, I really like how his scout nature shines through here against Kraith’s more impulsive nature- kind of like a mirror/inverse of Quinlan and Dakkan. I mean, Bevan seems more cheerful than Kraith (not that we can tell with the, ah, limited amount of screen time that Kraith had) but Bevan has the aforementioned scout nature and the important elder family member.
….Please don’t let that be foreshadowing.
I love the way Bevan’s skills show through in this piece. We really feel like he knows what he’s talking about when he runs through strategy and geology in his head, and the combat feels organic and messy- complete with fumbles, bad luck and hiccups. And, of course, it’s always fully noticeable that the characters aren’t human, even if their personalities and characterizations feel very human- Bevan taking to the trees and the keen Canid senses and the No plan survives first contact with the enemy, after all. I liked the imagery with the floating cloud of pine needles when the last Canid hit the ground. The half-moment Bevan took to grieve really had impact without detracting from the tension, too. It’s nice to see a character be affected by such emotion during their trials and adrenaline.
And then we got to the Evyn-Din, and the reason why Bevan wears his hood- his tribe made everything so much worse for everyone else. So I guess we can say that Kraith has joined the pantheon of people who have pulled a Dakkan (namely, Kenosh)
So much worldbuilding, it’s beautiful. I guess one good thing to come out of the Deltrada mess in chapter two is that maybe in chapter three, Bevan can visit Kraith’s cairn, even if only for a moment. Or perhaps he already did. We Just Don’t Know. I’d be interested in knowing what tribes, if any, gave aid to the Evyn-Din.
So did Hardin just plop down by a Evyn campfire? Has he been there for a while? He’s definitely been watching Bevan for quite some time if what Ashtor said near the end of Chapter One is in effect here. I loved the development on Bevan’s attitude toward his tattoos as well.
While I’m definitely looking forward to what comes next in Song of the Eastern Sands, I’m going to miss these prose stories.
Veigue’s art is always a pleasure to look at! I love the way Veigue draws the squirrel tails and the backgrounds. War of the Western Deep is definitely a side story I hope sees on the light of day someday!
Excellent work, as always.
Hur hur, you said “pore Kraith”, hur hur!
But yes, it’s great that the story seeks convey Bevan chronic analysis of his enviroment and quick thinking. Being armed with one-shot daggers also helps.
I am, however, surprised that every single Ermehn tribe knows what Evyn’s tattoos look like. I mean, the waste is a big place and it’s been a few years since Evyn and friends ™ went to zerg-rush the enemy base, and it’s not like the Ermehn have pictures or charts showing what each tribe’s tattoos are.
I am also surprised Bevan didn’t make any sardonic comment about how Hardin calls his tribe the “Sratha-din”. I know, I know, this story serves the purpose of telling Bevan’s origins in a nutshell, that’s why everything happens so fast, but still…
Well of course, he’s probably the the model for L’H’arkenlowe face paint. Gotta have good pores.
The Evyn-din are a pretty large and powerful tribe and it’s implied they’re nomadic so there’s a lot of traveling/interaction going on there. Word probably travels fast in the Wastes, especially when the Canid show up to punish you for someone else’s stupidity
Furry Road was an April’s Fool joke, was it? So were the pandaren in Warcraft 3 back in 2002, and now look at them. Look at them!
I expect Furry Road by second quarter 2017,. Thank you.
April fools day gag or not, make em dlc costume packs and I bet people would buy them o.o
I am actually rather dissapointed there are no games, even role play forums based on this yet x.x I feel like it should be some kind of mmo or even an rpg maker spin off somewhere xD
Also thank you for the short story. In all honesty itsthe detail in the background characters that bring this story to life. They are also the ones I root for the most c:
Why is it that the cheerful and quirkiest of characters always have the saddest backstories?
I’m agreeing with Shield here with how Bevan and Kraith mirrored Quinlan and Dakkan in terms battle aptitude. Hopefully this doesn’t foreshadow future events for the duo…well I mean even more after that Deltrada fiasco. And with Hardin just mysteriously pulling a Batman, I chuckled more than it was intended. Really though this was an enjoyable read. It felt it had a lot more going on than the previous two (probably due to all the action and imagery).
And oh dear! Even when you saved it, the image still looks really small? I need to tumblr better… But still, thank you for sharing these!
You can still call me “Veigue” though Alex :P
lol Sorry, Veigue — don’t know what I was thinking X) Fixed the post accordingly!
No prob bob.
Loved getting backstory on how Bevan joined the Sratha-Din, as well as why he so adamantly wears the hood, although I do have to echo the sentiment that I wish we could have seen this in the main comic line. Oh well, can’t have everything.
Now that the tone of this website has been shifted back to the appropriate level of impending doom, we’ll return to our thieving friends as they begin to make a plan that will invariably have as many holes as a colander.
Until next time, stay crafty.
I’ve been following this comic for about a year and a half now I think and I gotta say that I am hooked. I had no idea how big the community for this comic is. There I was looking for Redwall related stuff and I find this gem. So much love and care was put into the world, its characters, and much more. I can’t wait for the next comic.
Also, what conventions do you guys attend exactly? I would really like to get the chance to show support in person.
Welcome to the Salmon Party, Sergeant! Glad to have you!
Hi SgtRock! Normally Rachel and I do one “far afield” show a year. We did Baltimore Comic Con two years ago, and last year Rachel and I hit up C2E2 in Chicago. This year, because of my changing work schedule and the difficulties getting the second book ready for Action Lab, we’ll be doing a few local shows later in the season. I’ll be at Hartford Comic Con, and we’re slated to appear at Boston Comic Con as well (Rachel may even return for that one). I also put in a request for a table at New York Comic Con, but that’s a bit of a gamble :)
Welcome to our little group! I hope to see you around some more!
Hello SgtRock101! Glad to have you here!